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Skull Joke?

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The redhead stared at a pointing forefinger, which directed his vision above. He followed the invisible line extended from the point and met with the fluttering flag above the crow's nest of the ship- an all black flag.

He scowled. "The only person that'd take apart someone else's ship is you!"

"Even so," Hiroki defended. "We are a pirate crew. We need a proper flag. Since you're the captain, Kidd-sama, it's your obligation to draw it."


Five minutes later...

"There, done!"

He stared at the atrocity that was a white circle and two black dots within the painted circle on the black cloth on the floor. "...What is this suppose to be?"

"Our Jolly Roger," Kidd answered, as if it was the most obvious thing in the world.

This is a skull?

Seeing that his shipwright was displeased, Kidd picked up the abandoned brush on the floor and proceeded editing their flag. The sockets were a little too small, he had to admit. He dipped the brush into black paint and made them bigger, stepped back, and observed the construction again. Something was missing.

Of course! How could he forget? A proper skull needed teeth! So he drew teeth, or rather, in Hiroki's point of view, a black chord within the circle followed by tiny line segments lining the chord.

"Happy?" Kidd drawled, threw the brush down and walked away to see the closing island.

Killer walked by.

"I've made a grave mistake, haven't I, Killer-san?" Hiroki asked.

The masked man stared down at the symbol of their crew. "Yes, you have."


From: Devil's Luck Chapter 21: Glorious Meridiano by Poseida Lunar aka ~EliasxEvans




Dev Description: Yaaaay, finally finished! This piece took me very very long. I love Devil's Luck, I really do. And this scene was just too epic. I mean - look at the Kidd Pirates' Jolly Roger. <sarcasm>It was obviously drawn by a real genius with mad painting skills</sarcasm>. And if you ask me Kidd fits this role perfectly.
Hmm ... what else to say?
HALF NAKED KILLER IS FANSERVICE!
So is Kidd's yummy back! YUMMY! :dummy: (that smilie rhymed!)
And I love Hiroki (black haired guy). He's pure awesomeness in a kimono. Ohhh - guys in Kimonos *3*.
And how do you like the sky in the last planel?! I love the clouds!!!!! Teheheheee. Nuff talking!




This part is for ~EliasxEvans, however feel free to read it xD

Okay uhm... I'm sorry about not fixing Hiroki's hair, I'm really really bad with short hair, the head shape is giving me a hard time and the coloring... AAARGH! After 5 tries I changed back to the old version, forgive me!
And now the more important part:
I know that as a writer you need good reviews to improve, it's no different as any other artist, but still... I know that my reviews aren't very helpful, because I mostly fangirl about Killer, Hiroki or Kidd or all three of them. Since English isn't my mother tongue I can't even help out by finding grammar/spelling mistakes because I'm never sure if something is wrong or right and... well. On top of that I'm the worst writer ever. I can't even express myself properly (I use FNNNNNNNNN or Asadasghdfashg to express Fangirl joy!), therefore I can't even help you out when it comes to style or content and I feel really bad about that.
So... Since I can't give you anything useful back, I just wanted to say Thank you for over 25 chapters of pure epicness and show my appreciation by doing something I'm good(?) at. It probably won't help you improve your writing, but maybe it's some kind of motivation to see that there are people who love what you do?

PS: If you want me to remove the story part, just let me know, I just didn't want to wait any longer with uploading otherwise I would have asked first - sorry



Kidd, Killer (c) Oda
Hiroki Shinoda (c) ~EliasxEvans
Devil's Luck (c) ~EliasxEvans
Art (c) =doriansburial
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sashaabaraiwolf's avatar
Law looks like a shinigami from bleach